Private Pitch Review
$47
You know your pitch on paper. But does it land out loud?
You built your pitch using the Narrative Pitch Framework. You know your Hero, your Conflict, your Turning Point, your Resolution, your Authority, your Epilogue. On the page, it reads clean.
But here's the catch: a pitch isn't a document. It's a performance. And the only way to know if it actually works is to say it out loud — to someone who can hear what your ideal client would hear. Most business owners never get that. They practice in the mirror, run it by a friend who says "sounds great!", or just wing it in the real conversation and find out too late that something didn't land.
This is that missing step.
What You Get
The Private Pitch Review is a personal, 1-on-1 diagnostic on the pitch you just built. You send me a video. I send you back exactly what I'd tell you if you were sitting across from me.
Upload a video of your current pitch — however you'd deliver it in real life.
Optionally include your completed Pitch Accelerator Worksheet — so I can review with full context, not guesswork.
Receive a private voice note from me within 48 hours — 5–10 minutes of real, personal feedback. What's landing, what's getting lost, and the one or two changes that will move the needle most.
No templates. No automation. My direct read on your actual pitch.
How It Works
Purchase The Private Pitch Review — $47, one-time.
Fill out the short form — upload your pitch video and, if you have it, your worksheet.
Get your voice note within 48 hours — specific, honest, actionable feedback you can apply before your next pitch, sales call, or stage.
Why It Works
I built the Narrative Pitch Framework because I've watched hundreds of smart, capable business owners lose the room — not because their offer was weak, but because their story didn't land. I've coached founders live on Pitch Perfect LIVE!, walked entrepreneurs through the full framework inside The Pitch Accelerator, and worked 1-on-1 with clients inside Command the Pitch.
Every fix I make comes from the same place: your pitch doesn't need more words. It needs the right words, delivered with clarity and confidence.
That's exactly what I'm listening for when I review yours — Hero, Conflict, Turning Point, Resolution, Authority, Epilogue, and how you deliver it (your Book Cover). If any element is "Not Landing" or "Needs Tightening," I'll tell you plainly, and I'll tell you how to fix it.
This Is For You If...
You've completed or are working through The Pitch Accelerator and have a pitch draft ready to test out loud.
You have a real pitch coming up and want it sharp before it matters.
You want direct, honest feedback — not a "sounds good!" from a friend being nice.
This Is Not For You If...
You haven't defined your offer yet. (Start with the free Offer Suite Clarity Map inside The Green Room Community first.)
You want a full messaging overhaul or ongoing coaching. (That's what the Spotlight Session is for.)
FAQs
How long should my video be?
However long your pitch naturally runs — most are 30 seconds to 3 minutes. Just deliver it the way you actually would in real life. Don't over-produce it.
Do I have to submit the worksheet?
No — it's optional. But if you have it, include it. It gives me the "why" behind your choices, which makes my feedback sharper and more specific to you.
What if I haven't finished The Pitch Accelerator?
This review works best once you have a full pitch draft. If you're still building it, finish the course first — this review is designed to test what you've already built.
What exactly will I get back?
A private, 5–10 minute voice note from me directly — what's landing, what's getting lost, and the one or two changes I'd make first.
What if I want more than a single review?
If your pitch needs a deeper rebuild — messaging, positioning, a full strategy session — that's exactly what the Spotlight Session is built for. Look for it as your next step.