
Your personal statement is finished but is it ready to submit? Get two rounds of personalized, written editorial feedback to help strengthen your story while keeping your voice at the center.
This review includes:
First pass: Feedback on clarity, structure, specific details, reflection, and authentic voice.
Second pass: A review of your revised draft, with feedback on remaining areas to polish.
How it works: Submit your completed draft, receive feedback, make your revisions, and send it back for the second review.
This service covers one personal statement. All feedback is provided in writing; a meeting and supplemental essays are not included. I provide guidance and revision suggestions. Students remain the authors of their essays. Book and submit your completed draft by Saturday, October 24.