
Have an essay draft but aren’t sure if it’s ready to submit? Let’s take a closer look.
The Essay Review + Consultation is designed for students who have already written their essay and want expert feedback on what’s working, what needs improvement, and how to make their writing stronger—without losing their authentic voice.
Your package includes:
Review of one college or scholarship essay up to 650 words
One 30-minute 1:1 Zoom consultation
Written feedback on content, organization, clarity, voice, and prompt alignment
Specific recommendations to strengthen your opening, storytelling, and conclusion
Guidance on what to revise before submitting
Please note: This package does not include line-by-line editing or a second review after revisions. If you need more hands-on editing and revision support, select the Essay Editing + Coaching package.
Turnaround: Please allow up to 5 business days for your essay review.
IMPORTANT: The Scholarship Bestie does not write essays for students. My goal is to help you strengthen your story, your writing, and your voice so you can submit an essay that still sounds like you.