
Nobody likes writing the synopsis. But when I like a query and the pages, I open the synopsis to answer one question: can this writer finish a story? A messy synopsis makes me wonder. A clean one makes me request.
I’ll read yours the way I read the ones in my inbox and tell you what I see.
What you get
A full read of your synopsis (up to 2 pages)
Notes in the margins showing where I got lost, where it dragged, and where the stakes went soft
A letter on the big stuff: does the plot hold together, is the ending clear, does your main character change, and does it match the book you pitched
Clear next steps for your revision
This is for you if
Your synopsis is the piece you trust least
You’re getting no full requests and want to rule it out
You’ve rewritten it so often you can’t judge it anymore
What to send: Your synopsis, your query, and your genre and word count. The query lets me check that both tell the same story.
Turnaround: 20 working days from purchase.
This is a paid review from me, Jessica Berg. It’s separate from Rosecliff Literary, and it isn’t an offer of or a path to representation.