1/2 Hour Pilot Notes

$200

This is your chance to get personal, detailed notes on your 1/2 hour pilot from a working TV writer (check my IMBD)! I'm not a "script guru" with strong opinions on slug lines. I'm someone who honed their trade and wants to help your hone yours.

First off, congrats on doing the hard work and writing a draft! Now what? The dreaded re-write! Fresh eyes from an experienced professional can make all the difference. My notes will help guide your script to the place YOU want it be.

What do you get out of this?

Your script read by a person that knows what they're doing!
Thoughtful notes on said script!
A one-on-one video discussion (or written notes) with me!
A swift, two-week turn around!

After payment, I'll provide you with an e-mail to send your script (<40pgs) to and schedule our video meeting.

You can request your notes be sent through e-mail if you don't want a video meeting.

1/2 Hour Pilot Notes

$200

What do you get out of this?

Your script read by a person that knows what they're doing!
Thoughtful notes on said script!
A one-on-one video discussion (or written notes) with me!
A swift, two-week turn around!

After payment, I'll provide you with an e-mail to send your script (<40pgs) to and schedule our video meeting.

You can request your notes be sent through e-mail if you don't want a video meeting.