Query Review & Written Response + Zoom
$90$115
Imagine Your Writing Transformed — Without the Hassle of Live Meetings ✨
What if you could get expert, personalized feedback on your manuscript or query letter — on your schedule? No more waiting for appointments, no more back-and-forth scheduling conflicts. Just clear, detailed, strategic guidance from someone who’s been in the trenches of publishing and editing for years.
If you're an emerging writer trying to catch an agent’s eye, this service is designed to elevate your work to the next level — without disrupting your busy life.
Your query is your shot at the door. Don’t waste it on guesswork.
Send Tommy your query letter, and he’ll send back:
A one-page written response breaking down what’s working, what’s holding you back, and how to sharpen your pitch.
Agent-level insight on clarity, market positioning, and hook strength.
Actionable next steps so you know exactly how to revise with confidence.
No fluff. No generic feedback. Just a professional eye on the most important page you’ll ever write..
How it works:
Purchase your Query Letter Review.
Within 24 hours, you’ll receive a confirmation email with instructions on how to send us your query.
Once we have your query, we’ll review it through an agent’s lens and send you a one-page written response within 2 weeks.
What you’ll get:
A clear breakdown of what’s working and what’s holding you back.
Agent-level insight on clarity, hook strength, and positioning.
Actionable next steps to help you revise with confidence.
I'm adding a Zoom meeting to discuss my suggestions and ways to improve your query letter so agents take notice of your story and writing craft!
📎 Submit: Query letter only (no pages or synopsis).
📅 Timeline: 24-hour confirmation → 2-week turnaround.
Take Action Today — Your Future as a Published Writer Awaits ✍️
Don’t let uncertainty or self-doubt hold you back. With expert feedback tailored to your work, you’ll gain clarity, confidence, and a clear path forward.
Every great writer had someone to guide them — now it’s your turn. Invest in your craft, your dreams, and your future.